Score: 6

"A Prologue Perhaps?"

submission: Folklore

date: June 23, 2008

You have left us all with a cliffhanger my good sir. We do not know if this girl plans on fighting back or not... we can't assume much here. Your artwork and detail are superb good sir, however I suggest you work on actually animating, but in this sense I do approve of your style of animation. The music also fit in quite nicely, but made me a bit sleepy to be honest.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Story
*Superb Artwork
*Great Animation
*Masterful Sound
*Entertaining

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 7

"Nicely Done"

submission: Jimmy & the Hell-O-Wierd

date: June 21, 2008

Well constructed I must say... but not entirely different from the first one except the battle in hell. You kept the same mediocre style that was portrayed in the first Jimmy. It still reminds me of the old days on Newgrounds, but I suggest you try a different story next time... a different villain for Jimmy to face. The sound was nice as was the artwork... your animation was lacking though. Great Job, can't wait for the next episode.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Sound
*Great Artwork
*Good Story

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Animation

Score: 7

"Some Improvements"

submission: Tha Wall

date: June 2, 2008

I did enjoy this flash very much, however a few small tweaks. One would be the animation, it ran in a jittery movement, plus the animation was a bit too fast, slow it down just a bit. Plus your THE END subtitle is too high, lower it down. Also a preloader would've been nice as well as a replay button. Your artwork was nicely done and I love your concept, please make another one.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Good Animation
*Superb Sound
*Superb Story

|| Bad Points ||
*Basic-Flash Requirements
+ Pre-Loader
+ Replay Button
*THE END Subtitle - Lower It

Score: 5

"Um... Okay."

submission: Stick Man Punishment!

date: June 1, 2008

I like your concept I really do, but creativity is lacking here. First off how about some sound effects, you know fire, gunshots, stickman screaming, etc. Also more of a selection of punishments as well as maybe better artwork, the lava joke wasn't that funny. You've got the concept, but not the actual base.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Idea
*Good Animation

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Artwork
*No Sound

Score: 9

"Bravo!"

submission: Brother Battle

date: May 30, 2008

Your sprite work was very well done, this wasn't too short at all, and the bloopers were also funny. I would like to see another Brother Battle in the near future. For this being your first flash, the animation was a bit slow, but it worked out well. The background music could've been louder, but it's all still good.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Animation
*Great Story
*Great Sprite Work
*Funny

|| Bad Points ||
*Sound Too Low

Score: 8

"Suggestions"

submission: AnonyDansen

date: May 30, 2008

The remix is a better choice to go with when doing the Caramell Dansen, but to each is his own. Your artwork and animation was done nicely, but not much too it, however you did make it different from other Caramells. Yes it was a bit glitchy as well, but there wasn't much glitch. For your first flash movie you did a great job.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Great Artwork
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Glitches Here and There

Score: 7

"Poor Jimmy..."

submission: Jimmy's Day in the Park

date: May 23, 2008

Well let me start off by saying that I'm not going to unleash holy hell on this flash, because well, you've brought back the certain flavor that used to grace Newgrounds when Newgrounds just started out. I do believe you will improve over time and I did enjoy this and would love to see more from this Jimmy. Your artwork wasn't good, but there was enough to put the imagination to work, like Atari. It was random, but entertaining. I did enjoy it as well as the bit of music. Something fun to send to someone no doubt. I suggest you work on your drawing as well as making your next flash longer.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Story
*Great Sound
*Okay Animation
*Random (Funny)

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Artwork
*Too Short

Score: 5

"C or B?"

submission: C or B? Remastered

date: May 22, 2008

Well, first off I'm disabling all points due to this flash, I am in no mood to give an explanation and I don't think I have to. This is a sad attempt at another big thing, I must admit I voted 5 out of sheer humor, however C will never be what B be today.

|| Points Disabled ||

Score: 7

"Pretty Good"

submission: INKmen: "username"

date: May 19, 2008

It was pretty good, however you need to fix some things. First off you might want to eliminate the Metal music for your intro and credits. Also a Preloader as well as Play and Replay buttons would serve well... plus you may want to work on the quality of the movie as well. Plus some light music in the background wouldn't serve to bad either. This was good, but could use improvements.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Story
*Okay Sound
*Good Artwork

|| Bad Points ||
*No Preloader

Score: 4

"Interesting Attempt"

submission: WebCam Jigsaw puzzle

date: May 15, 2008

I must admit that it was an interesting attempt. A gadget perhaps? Nah... this is a bit useless and it is quite boring. I'm sure you can find something else do make with a webcam feature, but until then I'm afraid I have to disable my points system for this seeing as there is practically nothing here.

|| Points Disabled ||