Score: 1

"Serious Improvement"

submission: i like your pants

date: April 19, 2008

Okay first off the artwork was really mediocre, I believe you could do better with more effort. Also the animation was very lacking, I couldn't tell if you were just motion-tweening or just being lazy. Also the music was just down right annoying. Your attempt at a random story was just terrible. Please put more effort into your flash work.

|| Good Points ||
(none)

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Artwork
*Bad Animation
*Bad Sound
*Terrible Random Story
*Need Serious Improvement

Score: 5

"Well..."

submission: : Next-door Neighbor :

date: April 18, 2008

When I saw the title I got so excited that you was going to rant about those peppy annoying next door neighbors, but sadly no... you did a stalker flash. Dude I seriously think you've lost your edge on Foamy you really have. It was funny, but got boring after Foamy was just repeating himself, there were no big problems or jokes in it except bad Orlando Bloom jokes we've heard already. I suggest you try to find your comedy platform once again.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Good Animation
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Story

|| 50/50 Points ||
*Funny At First Then Boring

Score: 7

"Wonderful"

submission: Mario and Cliff of Doom

date: April 12, 2008

You sir have put great effort into this I can tell. I would appreciate it if there were more sound effects like for Mario jumping and such. This should be finished as soon as possible, you've done an outstanding job. Also your preloader was awesome.

|| Good Points ||
*Funny
*Great Animation
*Good Sound
*Great Story

|| Bad Points ||
*Sound Effects Needed
*Incompleted

Score: 5

"Mediocre"

submission: Don't Stop Believing!

date: April 11, 2008

I like your stick figure art, but it could've been better with the animation. Also the song and animation went in sync perfectly, but you ended it right when it was getting good. Finish this flash please.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Artwork
*Good Sound
*Good Animation

|| Bad Points ||
*Finish It!

Score: 0

"This Needs A Lot of Work"

submission: Super Mario Bros 3 Parody

date: April 11, 2008

You hardly made any improvements whatsoever. All you did was add an even worse parody at the end. Okay your work with sprites and blood effects need a lot of work, also the crazy way the names of each parody was entering was still fucked up, don't ever do that again. Your music for the parodies and the music for your credits really messed up.

|| Good Points ||
*Nice Idea

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Sound
*Terrible Story
*Bad Animation

Score: 8

"This Was Quite Fun"

submission: TicTacToed

date: April 8, 2008

A very simple game taken to a very nice level indeed, but maybe more could've been done with it you know. I was thinking 2-Player Addition for more fun and maybe some background music as well wouldn't have hurt.

|| Good Points ||
*Very Fun
*Good Interactivity
*Great Artwork

|| Bad Points ||
*No Sound

|| 50/50 Points ||
*Two Player Interactivity

Score: 6

"One problem..."

submission: Beavis & Butthead: SB~

date: April 8, 2008

This was all funny and all. You got some very good quotes from the show, this I'm impressed with. However some of the sounds were louder than the others, I spent more time changing the volume on my speakers than I was listening to the sounds. Also some sounds ended with some kind of skip at the end, it would be wise to fix this.

|| Good Points ||
*Okay Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Sound Needs Improvement

Score: 9

"Bravo Indeed..."

submission: 49 Days of the Week Ep.1

date: April 8, 2008

Violent, Idiotic, Funny. You have done very well on this flash and I can't wait for more from this series. An excellent job indeed. The voice acting was great as well as your sound. Your artwork could've been better, but was still nice, same with the animation.

|| Good Points ||
*Funny
*Great Story
*Good Artwork
*Good Animation
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 8

"Pretty Good..."

submission: The Yellow Banana

date: April 8, 2008

For your first flash movie this is pretty good. It reminded me of something like TheWeebl. Your artwork was a bit mediocre, but still nice. Your animation was a bit lazy, but also still good. My main reason for adoring this flash is probably the song. Job well done.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Artwork
*Okay Animation
*Superb Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Animation Bit Lazy

Score: 7

"Pretty Good..."

submission: TANKMEN: The Musical!

date: April 6, 2008

I like the first music scene, it was funny, the second one when I heard the music I was expecting something more funny than what you presented, it was good, but there should've been more. The last scene was a bit pitiful really... I don't know why you chose such a hard song to work with, it was basically nothing to tell the truth. Your animation was greatly done, but I'm not going to give you points for artwork since it wasn't yours.

|| Good Points ||
[ Artwork Points Disabled : Art done by JohnnyUtah w/permission ]
*Great Animation
*Funny
*Creative

|| Bad Points ||
*Could've Been Better
*Could've Been Longer