Score: 10

"Superb"

submission: Another Day Eight

date: April 6, 2008

Another Superb Flash. You have done an outstanding job once again. Your artwork has become absolutely perfect, especially with the water work, truly outstanding. Your animation work was also quite magnificent as well. And let's not forget the music... out of all the music you've chosen for the series I do believe this is the best you've chosen, I would love to hear more of Joanna Barrow's work in your Another Day series.

|| Good Points |\
*Masterful Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Superb Story
*Superb Sound

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 9

"Nicely Done..."

submission: Warrior's endeavor.

date: April 4, 2008

Your artwork and animation were very well done. Also I enjoyed the story you told. However, your skills of combining the music and voice was a little off. Now then the flash was very good, but it was way too short... if you don't mind could you please finish it?

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Great Story

|| Bad Points ||
*Voice Acting and Music Not Balanced
*Too Short

Score: 8

"Spot On... Spot On..."

submission: 49 Days of the Week Ep.2

date: April 4, 2008

This series does have great potential. Although the artwork is sloppy I think it's supposed to be to give it that effect. The 49 Guy is a character that I think will make a stand here on Newgrounds. Now then your animation was well done, to be honest nothing wrong. The graphics were also pretty well done as well. However the voice acting could've been better, but it was alright for what it was.

|| Good Points ||
*Very Funny
*Great Animation
*Good Artwork
*Great Sound
*Great Story

|| Bad Points ||
*Voice Acting

Score: 9

"Bravo... Very Impressive"

submission: Final Fantasy 7 -Remnant-

date: April 1, 2008

Your animation work was very good. I'm not going to judge your artwork due to the fact that this was a tribute. Also your subtitles didn't actually keep up with the character's voices. I loved the music you chose for this, it really captivated the moments in this flash.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Great Artwork
*Superb Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Voices Going Faster Than Subtitles

Score: 10

"After Many Attempts, Great Job!"

submission: Patty Penguin: Walrus War

date: April 1, 2008

You still held great animation, choices of background music, fourteen magnificent levels including a boss at the end. Now then the boss was kind of tricky to beat, but becomes quite easy to beat. The controls were also well done, although the way you did health was a little confusing, but it was more aware then the energy bar. By taking the fuel away you gave this game less of a challenge, but I think you needed to take it away. Overall you've made an outstanding game.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Sound
*Great Animation
*Superb Controls
*Challenging 6 out of 10

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 5

"Alright..."

submission: Playing With Blocks

date: March 29, 2008

Let's start. Your concept was nice, not a bad idea and not a bad title. Your artwork was a bit sloppy, but the moving animation that supported it didn't really make it look too bad, it could've used it a bit more though. Also there was color in your title screen so why couldn't you have had color in the whole flash and not just for the blood and title screen? Also it was way too short and I didn't follow it too much. It was funny I'll give you that, but too short, some background music could've been nice as well.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Animation
*Okay Artwork
*Funny

|| Bad Points ||
*Artwork Bit Sloppy
*Too Short
*Animation Could've Used Work
*Color Here - None There. WTF?
*Background Music

Score: 10

"..."

submission: Whisper: The Movie

date: March 24, 2008

An understanding by none is an understanding by others. Before no one can understand something they must first know that it is nothing. Your animation gave a deep understanding that no one will relate to as being the same meaning. The sound choice was also great, but your animation wasn't too colorful, but you brought everything together again.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Animation
*Great Artwork
*Super Story

|| Bad Points ||
*Animation Could've Used More Work

Score: 10

"Classic and Funny"

submission: Looking Up

date: March 24, 2008

Revival of a classic joke... brilliant! Your animation and sound worked so good together with your great artwork as well. You've done an excellent job on this flash and we can only hope to see greater and funnier things from you within the future.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Great Sound
*Great Artwork
*Revival of Funny Joke

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 9

"Classic Clock Crew"

submission: Clock Crew Shorts

date: March 19, 2008

These shorts were funny, but you could've had more shorts. Other than that I loved the animation and the sound was your basic Clock Crew sound effects so nothing really wrong there however judging a flash I have to keep everything fair. After viewing this flash I did enjoy it and would consider watching it again.

|| Good Points ||
*Funny
*Good Sound
*Great Animation

|| Bad Points ||
*More Shorts
*The Voice (I have to be fair to other flashes)

Score: 5

"I Don't Quite Understand"

submission: LoD Guild Introduction

date: March 18, 2008

To tell the truth I really didn't understand this flash. You said this was meant to be "an introduction for my guild (like a clan) in a game called Well of Souls." So this is basically advertising your group. I can understand wanting to advertise your group, but making a flash for just your group may have gone too far. Now then I'm giving you a five out of ten because although it is an advertisement your group could end up making some things for Newgrounds and this flash would be something nice to look back on. The sound was good and your flash skills aren't too shabby, if I were you I would seriously consider branching out your flash skills. Now then this wasn't bad, but don't do advertising ever again, I'm just telling you this for your own safety.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Flash Skills
*Good Sound

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

|| 50/50 Points ||
*Advertising