Score: 4

"You Have Problems"

submission: Puzzle Boy

date: March 16, 2008

First off the controls really didn't move when you wanted them to. Also a guide of what does what in the game would've been helpful due to the fact that I didn't know what to do. Also some sound effects and music would be a good thing to add into this as well. You can make everything look colorful, but as for everything else I didn't know what to do.

|| Good Points ||
*Looks Good

|| Bad Points ||
*No Sound
*No Music
*Controls Don't Work
*No Help Guide

Score: 10

"Bravo!"

submission: "Tree Of Life"

date: March 11, 2008

The growth of a tree. How to make a flash about this is a very odd concept, but you have pulled it off. With outstanding animation and a pick of a great song I say you've really done an excellent job. I expect more great things from you in the future, great things.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Audio
*Superb Artwork
*Great Animation
*Great Story

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 9

"Nice!"

submission: Line Rider

date: March 11, 2008

All very funny, but I would've liked to see more, you know like one long line rider where the little man goes through tons and tons of pain. You did everything quite well and made this very funny, but a REPLAY button would be appreciated next time.

|| Good Points ||
*Funny
*Good Animation

|| Bad Points ||
*Longer Line Rider Moments

Score: 10

"Satire Through Art..."

submission: The Pen is Mightier...

date: March 8, 2008

The majestic way that you gave the bullet shape, color, and style through animation effects that sync along with the majestic music it moved me. It really did. With the light comedy presentation given to something that is so dark when thought through with great thought put into it. This has been one flash that I have enjoyed and will enjoy again and again within the future. Thank you for creating this flash.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Animation
*Superb Artwork
*Great Satire
*Superb Sound

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 7

"Doesn't Seem Like Months and Months of Labor"

submission: The NG Rules

date: March 6, 2008

First off this is a great idea and could be quite useful, but what you need is to give it more flare to it. Make it more colorful, more shiny! Also a pause button wouldn't hurt either and pictures would also give this greatness as well. You're on the right track you just need to spruce it up.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Idea
*Superb Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Needs More
*Pause Button Is Essential Need

Score: 5

"Helpful Advice"

submission: simple mario loop 2.0

date: March 6, 2008

First of all since this is a loop I'm not going to give you anything great out of it. Now then try starting the music when the movie plays instead of at the preloader. Also your work with sprites is great, but I want more of a story with it next time okay. I don't know how to compress mp3 files, but if you venture over to the Flash Forums I'm sure you'll find out soon enough.

|| Good Points ||
*Good With Sprites
*Nice Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Put More Together

Score: 10

"Bravo Good Sir Bravo Indeed!"

submission: Shorts To Wear Pants To

date: March 5, 2008

I see this reaching the frontpage very quickly indeed. The songs, the artwork, the animation all came together so smoothly! Plus the sheer randomness put into each and every short was just magnificent. In which that is what randomness is supposed to be... humor with no effort. Also each song gave each short its well deserved honor. I see a sequel in the future I really do.

|| Good Points ||
*Hilarious
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Superb Sound
*Superb Randomness

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 3

"I'm Gonna Be Honest With You"

submission: New Super Mario Bloopers

date: March 2, 2008

This wasn't really good. You can do better with sprites than this. First off the music at the beginning that you chose was just horrible, I'm glad the rest of the music you chose was good. Also the first joke was funny, but could've used more of a punchline. Your second joke was okay not the funniest in the world. Your last joke was basically pitiful. This was far too short and was not given enough effort... I say you try again and then we'll see if it should be in the Mario collection.

|| Good Points ||
*Okay With Sprites
*Kind Of Funny

|| Bad Points ||
*Need Better Punchlines
*Too Short
*Sprites Need More Work
*Put More Care Into Picking Songs

Score: 9

"Hilarious!"

submission: Office Booty

date: March 1, 2008

Very funny and very true. A creation such as this is great! The mild-mannered man and his plan that fails miserably. The animation was good, but it could've used color. Also the sounds of the office were great as well... and the guy walking up and watching, classic.

|| Good Points ||
*Very Funny
*Truth In Flash
*Great Sound
*Great Animation

|| Bad Points ||
*No Color

Score: 7

"Very Nice"

submission: Tetris Deathtrap

date: February 27, 2008

This was very nicely done, in fact you should think about turning this into a sort of game. The animation wasn't all that great, it was good, but could've used more work. Also Stick Figures fighting within this Tetris Deathtrap would've really been awesome, but this was still good either way around.

|| Good Points ||
*Nice Idea
*Good Animation
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Could've Used More Work
*Done At A Slow Pace