Score: 10

"Bouncing Here and There and Everywhere!"

submission: Gunny Bears

date: November 30, 2009

I must say that the placement and presentation of everything here made the artistic look of this quite superb I must say. The bases made of caramel and chocolate as well as the weapons and using candy corn to represent gunfire was just genius! The animation is masterful! Stop motion animating is not the easiest thing to do... it is pretty much putting frame-by-frame animation into the real world. I commend you on your stop motion animation. The story is superb as well, a bit fast, but I think that adds to it... the ending with you eating the gummy bears though was a tad bit lame. The sound effects were superb and the minimal voice acting was great. I would be more than happy to see another stop-motion animation from you in the near future!

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Masterful Animation
*Superb Sound
*Great Voice
*Superb Story
*Quite Funny

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 10

"The Start of an Epic Series!"

submission: LARRY episode 1

date: November 17, 2009

Your artwork and animation are completely superb, very comical looking as well. The sound is beautiful... kudos to David Orr. The voice acting is spot on and hilarious especially from your part. The main point here is the storyline... I honestly can't wait to see what happens next. Like I said it's the start of a wonderful series.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Superb Voice
*Superb Story
*Outstandingly Hilarious!

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 4

"Boring"

submission: Dead Garage Vol.1

date: November 17, 2009

The artwork may be great, but the animation isn't all that great, especially on the rock band at the beginning. The sound choices are hit and miss here, the song at the beginning was good, but the one through the rest of the flash wasn't. The storyline... well there is no story, why is the Grim Reaper trying to kill these guys? I'm not really sure what's going on here.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Good Animation
*Good Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Terrible Story

Score: 8

"Our Psychedelic Light Show"

submission: Lifesucks:Say NO to Drugs

date: November 17, 2009

The artwork is great, from the expressions on James and Erika... to the Drug Dealer. However the animation at some points seemed a bit awkward... it's kind of hard to explain. The sound effects were great and the music was chosen well. The voice acting is hit and miss... I didn't like the voice actress you casted for Erika and I could obviously tell that the voice for James was the same one for the Drug Dealer which was you. The voice for James was outstanding though, kudos to you good sir. The storyline is hilarious! Mainly the dialogue from James and Erika. Hell I didn't even think James getting hit by the truck was the funniest part of this flash it wasn't. All in all a great flash.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Good Animation
*Great Sound
*Good Voice
*Quite Funny

|| Bad Points ||
*Voice - Erika's Voice

Score: 10

"Is There A Doctor In The House?"

submission: Dr. Mario with Lyrics

date: November 12, 2009

Your artwork and animation are quite superb. The voice work from the characters and from Brentalfloss are just hilarious and quite spot on. The song was absolutely hilarious! It gets funnier and funnier everytime I listen to it. I really don't have anything to really complain about.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Superb Sound
*Superb Voice
*Outstandingly Hilarious!

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 8

"Paper Beats Scissors"

submission: Three Shears for Scissors

date: November 11, 2009

Wow, now this flash was quite hilarious! The artwork is great, but the animation did seemed a bit lacking. The voice acting was great and so were the sound effects. The storyline though is where this flash shines, the ending really did surprise me... I thought Rock was going to crush Scissors, but that surely wasn't the case. Overall it's a good flash.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Good Animation
*Great Sound
*Great Voice
*Superb Story
*Hilarious!

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 9

"By Using Your "IMAGINATION""

submission: Daydream +

date: November 11, 2009

First off your artwork and animation are quite superb. Everything flows so well. The voice acting was also quite superb... very comical with the monotone voices, but also good with the -commentary- bit at the end. The background music I think could've been better, it was alright, but it just seemed rather bland to be honest. The storyline was brilliant, capturing the imagination of someone and then having them fail... but the commentary and text commentary of the commentary was comic gold. Something I truly enjoyed to be honest.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Good Sound
*Superb Voice
*Superb Story

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 7

"Instruction Booklet Required"

submission: Moon World

date: November 8, 2009

Well let's start with the positive. The artwork and animation are both superb, the details on the hero, enemies, items, and environment are all represented beautifully. The gameplay is actually a good idea, this seems like a combination of "Lode Runner" and "Super Mario Bros." which I like. Now for the negative aspects... the sound effects were great, but the background music doesn't fit with this game, swap out the Mario music with something a bit more spacey, but subtle... check the Newgrounds Audio Portal for more. The main flaw about this game are the controls and information. You tell us what to get to win and you also tell us how to move, which is nice, but it would've been nice to know that enemies would be spawning out of one of these things and there's not a lot of room to really out run all of them like in Lode Runner. As for the controls they are way too slippery. Seriously my character just goes slipping and sliding all over the place, that needs to be fixed as well.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Good Sound
*Good Gameplay

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Controls
*Gameplay - More Detail Please?
*Sound - Background Music - Not Fitting

Score: 9

"Sweet Lemonade, Yes Sweet Lemonade"

submission: Get on My Horse

date: November 8, 2009

This flash is quite good. The song enough is a very superb song, although one for rhyme the reason is not quite here, but that's normal in any song from you. The artwork is superb, the cartoon characters are zany looking, but their expressions are quite funny and represent their emotions well. There really isn't exactly a lot of animation going on here, but what is here is great! Overall a delightful flash.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Great Animation
*Superb Sound
*Hilarious!
*Sweet Lemonade

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Score: 9

"Writing... Getting Better and Worse"

submission: Super Mario bros Z ep.8

date: October 12, 2009

Well the story you're telling here is getting better. However the dialogue sequence between Shadow and Sonic made the story generic and boring as hell. The animation with the fighting scenes was just outstanding. This cliffhanger ending I wasn't quite fond of though, but I am anticipating the 9th Episode... hopefully it won't take as long for you to put together, but by all means take your time. Overall this was a nice installment, but it kind of gave me a letdown.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Animation
*Superb Sound
*Great Story
*Hilarious!

|| Bad Points ||
*Story - Seems Generic
*Story - Cliffhanger Ending