Not Good
Your sprites need a lot of work, also animating the sprites will also need a lot of work. Plus make sure your reviewers have enough time to read the text. Your sound was also very bad, repeating again and again scene after scene. You need a lot of work on this and maybe even some advice. Try talking to Alvin-Earthworm, he can help you with your sprites.
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*Sprite Work
*Sound Needs Work
*Text Goes By To Fast