The-Great-One's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[iPaper]

Not bad...

Not bad at all...for a video though your graphics were kinda bad, but still good. I love your parody of the iphone and can offer new ideas to you also (Check for PM). The concept is great and for a video your sound quality is superb. Just one question, at the very end what was the message?

|| Good Points ||
*Good for a Video
*Comical
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Quality kinda bad

Bluedude1044 responds:

Sorry about the quality. It was because the file was to big. And it said "in stores never"

[Mario's Crazy]

Very Nice

I enjoyed this flash very much. Reminded me of Benny Hill. Your sprite work is good, but I ask that your artwork improve. Other than that you did an excellent job on this flash, I suggest you keep up the good work.

|| Good Points ||
*Great with Sprites
*Good with Art
*Excellent Sound
*Very Funny

|| Bad Points ||
*Artwork Could Use Improvement

[Akira The Don - L.I.T.F.]

A Song Fit For Newgrounds

If there was ever a song that defined the members of Newgrounds it would be this song. This is by far one of the greatest music video flashes of Newgrounds since Magical Trevor and The PICO Day Anthem. The animation and sound synced perfectly together even on my P.O.C.C. (Piece Of Crap Computer). Speaking of which the animation was very well done and matched the song perfectly with enough humor to describe the song perfectly! However one small flaw was that the subtitles didn't work when you wanted to revist a part of the flash you wanted to. It would be nice to fix this problem, but it's not all that important. All over though Superb Work Indeed!

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Animation
*Superb Sound
*Superb Efforts

|| Bad Points ||
*Subtitles

[Its A Chain Reaction!!]

Keep Trying...

Ths sound was off, but you did tell us of that. I can see the work you put into it, but more of an effort wouldn't kill ya either. Your animation good use more work and please if you make another one, make it longer. Other than that it was okay, you just have a nice bit of room to improve.

|| Good Points ||
*It was okay

|| Bad Points ||
*Too short
*Animation needs work
*Sound needs work

mamacaddyhat responds:

Yep, I didnt know how to change the sound, i did try.

anyway thanks for the review, much appreciated! ;)

[Homeless Clown]

Too Short

You have good talent, good animation, and do great with sound, but I suggest you push that to the next level. Please don't think of this review as bad, but not good too. Use Newgrounds not to test things, but to show more of your talent. That is all I have to say.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Great Talent
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Too Short

[Super Sprite Bloopers]

Whoa Bad...

Well, your sprite skills are good, but it seems when it comes to ideas and the times here on Newgrounds you're late. Now then for one the Numa Numa Craze is over, same with the jokes, plus I believe you've taken the idea from Robot Chicken or Skittles N' Bitz (in which Skittles N' Bitz is just Robot Chicken with Sprites). Plus you gave this the wrong title, this is just random sprites formed to try and be Skittles N' Bitz, not Bloopers. I think you need a writer to write your material for you... or you need to work harder on your concept of comedy.

|| Good Points ||
*Good with Sprites

|| Bad Points ||
*Wrong Title
*A Basic Ripoff of Skittles N' Bitz
*Not Funny

PaperBat responds:

Robot Chicken, Im A Huge fan, thats why i made this, Do YOU complain to the creaotr of Skittlez and Bits about ow he copys robot chicken?

[Awesome techno dance!]

Where Have I Seen This Before?

Oh yeah...well on a personal note I should tell you that your obsession over a cartoon show that nobody likes is unhealthy. Now then making a flash of just techno music and moving clip art with an annoying background is just spamming the portal with flash that people don't won't to see. Now then I've seen this before so let me refresh some people's memories... oh yeah Kitty Krew and Star Syndicate, except without the dicks. Come on man, try more!

|| Good Points ||
(none)

|| Bad Points ||
*Nothing but Animated Clip Art
*Annoying Music
*Like A Kitty Krew Flash

bernie-buddy responds:

I will have you know that "Corneil & Bernie" is a well liked cartoon, your review was abusive, and overall, you do not act mature enough, it is just a flash i made, in fact, it's the very first flash i submitted to newgrounds.

[Giant slicer of DOOM!]

Hmm...

Well, for one thing I thought you decided to leave because YouTube is so much cooler than Newgrounds, but that aside I did enjoy this a small bit, seeing as it's so short there isn't much to enjoy. Your animation is very well done, even though it is stick figures you still give quality to your flash. I did enjoy the music to... but a different selection next time if you could. My only big complaint is that it was too short, and there is no sorry for it being too short, you either finish your work no matter how long it takes or you make it short due to laziness. I will be waiting to see improvements in your work in the later future. Now then you did say there wasn't a plot, and that's okay, not everything is supposed to have a plot, a small plot could be nice, but not needed.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Animation
*Music is Okay

|| Bad Points ||
*Too Short