The-Great-One's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wii Are Sold Out]

L O L

Your animation was very superb as was your voice acting skills. I will admit that it was somewhat short, but short isn't bad... in fact here it was a good thing. Also the bases of truth in which the Nintendo Wii is usually always sold out. Your sound on the screaming was a bit annoying, but then again anger isn't supposed to be happy.
I say you did a superb job on this flash and can only hope for more great work to come.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Animation
*Superb Voice Acting
*Superb Sound

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

[Mario Versus Tetris]

Hmm... a bit of advice to you...

Your handy work with sprites isn't bad I'll admit, but you really could've put more effort into this. Why not just use all sprites in your movie including castles, explosions, and such. Getting music from the audio portal was wise, but I suggest the classic Mario music for the beginning of the flash instead of just silence then busting into music with the Koopa. Your idea is great I enjoy your idea very much, but you need a better way of presenting it...

|| Good Points ||
*Handy with sprites
*Good Idea

|| Bad Points ||
*Just use more sprites
*Music
*More Effort

[First C&B stick animation]

Not Bad...but not Good.

Okay I can get passed the whole Corneil & Bernie thing to review this flash fairly. Now then your stick figures aren't too bad, they could've used more work back then, but I do believe you've improved over time. I suggest writing your own material though or find a writer on Newgrounds to write your stuff for you, you shouldn't be taking characters from other shows unless you plan on making them into a very funny parody.

|| Good Points ||
*Okay stick figures
*Good Sound
*Okay Story
*Okay Animation

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Artwork
*

bernie-buddy responds:

What part of OLD FLASH MOVIE did you not under stand?!

[Video TEST "Choclat Milk"]

Well...

It was good, it really was, but when you submit flash don't submit it just because it's a test on whether or not people will like it or not. I mean you do possess skills, but you don't know how to take your skills and make great ideas. Before you continue onward I suggest you revise this flash and add sound to it. I also suggest you find a writer to write material for you to animate.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Video
*Great Animation

|| Bad Points ||
*No Sound
*No Story

[Chip & Dale find Maddy]

Not bad...

For something done in 5 minutes... I suggest you do something a little bit more better, but use DuckTales! Your Flash work is great, but I was looking for more animation.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Flash Skills
*Okay Animation
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Need More Animation

[What if Mario was kiddy?]

That is funny!

Very funny, very good, background music would've been nice though and you could've had the text go by a bit slower.

|| Good Points ||
*Very funny
*Great with Sprites

|| Bad Points ||
*Text too fast
*Background Music

[Things that make me Angry]

A Good Start...

The story is good and interesting and follows with the animation. It makes sense and I love it! I also can't wait for the next part of this series. Your sound and animation were smooth and so was your animations, but the story really didn't catch me completely... all I can say is I want to see more of this series.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Great Sound
*Funny

|| Bad Points ||
*Story Not All That Great

Miren2k responds:

cool thanks for the review - its weird though, other people have said the complete opposite: bad animation - but very good concept and story

i appreciate your review - il just try improve everything as much as i can as i get on in the world of animating perhaps have a story you can more easily relate to in my next one aswel

[Smash Kingdom]

Smashing Good Fun!

A great piece of work for the world of Newgrounds. From parodies to stuff that could actually happen in the game, (or would be awesome if it did) but other than that, you guys did a terrific job with everything from your sprite work, to your sound, to well everything! You even used the Skittles N' Bitz style to present it. Great Job!

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Sound
*Awesome Sprite Work
*Loved The Easter Egg

Added Note, I can tell Xcyber33 is an Alvin-Earthworm fan from his Mario vs. Sonic contribution... great job on that as well.