The-Great-One's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The X Chronicles]

Not Too Shabby...

Your sprite work is quite good, your storyline is exceedingly well. There are scenes with background music and scenes with no background music at all. This is where it becomes quite odd. Also the history text went by a bit too fast. All in all it was a decent flash and being your first was done quite well.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Good Sound
*Great Story

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Anwich responds:

thank you very much, yeah, i realize the sound isnt great, but i really had no one to guide me on that, but i recently found a mucchhhhh better way to both cut down on filesize and have the music playing the whole time! thank you for your review!

[Frame By Frame Flash]

Pretty Good

Your artwork and animation were both really great, You stated this is random drawings coming from your mind and I must say I enjoyed your randomness. However your background music choice didn't really fit this flash at all and I actually ended up turning off my speakers so I could enjoy the flash. All in all pretty good.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Great Animation
*Great Story
*Amusing

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Sound

J0hnnyR0tt3n responds:

well everyone has there own style of music, I love Horse the Band so it was only natural for me to choose them in my work. Thanks for the review and try to keep in mind that this is my second flash ever and i learn everything by myself! i hate tuts.

[Mad Mad Mario]

Hilarious!

Your artwork and animation were the same from Prostitute Mickey and although it fits well here, it doesn't seem right to me. Your sound was great, but your voice over was quiet, it should be louder. This is another idea that you could keep running with if you wanted to, although some would say it would be better to leave it as is. This was a hilarious and enjoyable flash movie.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Superb Sound
*Great Voice
*Superb Story
*Outstandingly Hilarious!

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

[In Solitude]

Truly Outstanding

This flash submission sticks out the most through it's stylish presentation and storyline that I believe it does anywhere else. Your artwork and animation were nothing short of superb. Your sound choice matched perfectly with the storyline and last but not least the storyline was probably one of the best I've seen. I enjoyed this flash very much and would recommend it to anyone. To start off with the blank page and let the mind wonder.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Superb Sound
*Masterful Story
*Deep Message

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

[Red Vs. Grey Part 2]

Better, but still Too Short

Why are these parts so short? Why couldn't they have been put together? Well your artwork and animation have improved this time around and have made this flash somewhat enjoyable, if it were longer it would be more enjoyable... I actually decided to time this flash, it was only 40 seconds long. Actually work hard and make a full flash next time... please?

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Great Animation
*Superb Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Too Short

[Red vs. Grey part 1]

What Happened?

Epic fight scene that happens right after a short simple computer session, fade to black and then that's the end? Your artwork in this is sloppy, but you make up for the animation. As for the sound, that joke wasn't even funny the first time.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Artwork
*Great Animation

|| Bad Points ||
*Confusion

[Mindless Stick Violence 1]

What Happened?

Seriously, what the fuck just happened? Your artwork with stick figures have gone better, but your animation went by way too fast and I didn't keep up with any of it. What happened at the beginning? What happened at the end? I have no idea what just happened. It sucks when you blink and miss half of the flash movie. Tone down the speed man, the best thing about action sequences is getting to see them. The sound was heavy metal, which I was actually surprised you put in this flash, it just made it seem generic, which is a bad thing. This flash could've been a lot better, if I had any idea what happened.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Okay Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Animation
*Too Fast

tankbuster781 responds:

lol wut
this is one of my oldest flashes I have made, don't expect anything all great and stuff.
Plus, there really wasn't any point to this movie, that's why it's called mindless stick violence.
also, cut me some slack. I made this when I was 12 and I barely had any flash experience. But still, thanks for reviewing my movies.

[Messing with red...]

Better than Messing with coffee...

This is better than the original I must say. The artwork is still sloppy, you could've done more work on this than you did. The animation this time around was much better. I also loved the background music you picked for this, classy yet enough for the action. One thing that really gripes me though was that this was too short... why did you only work on it for 1 Day?

|| Good Points ||
*Good Artwork
*Great Animation
*Superb Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Too Short

tankbuster781 responds:

Well, my movies are very short because I really don't have that kind of patience to make a 2 minute movie because I go out alot then the movie will take like 5 months to make.

[Messing with coffee...]

Not Bad For First

For just being bored and working on a flash this isn't too bad. Your artwork was sloppy even for stick figures. The animation was hard to pinpoint because everything moved too fast. It wasn't bad, but could've been better. As for the sound, I really don't get what the point was of adding Soulja-Boy, this was about coffee and where it went from there is just awkward.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Artwork
*Confused Animation
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Too Fast

[Everything by Everyone]

Amazing Work

Indeed an epic tribute. First off to comment is the song, it truly made this flash what it was. Your artwork and animation were superb. While watching this flash I was given a warm fuzzy feeling inside and I suggest you make a second one and include other charcters you missed like Salad Fingers and Guido from Strategy Guide. Bottom line is you have made a great flash and this certainly deserves a special place on Newgrounds.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Superb Sound
*Awesome Tribute

|| Bad Points ||
(none)