Not Too Shabby...
Your sprite work is quite good, your storyline is exceedingly well. There are scenes with background music and scenes with no background music at all. This is where it becomes quite odd. Also the history text went by a bit too fast. All in all it was a decent flash and being your first was done quite well.
|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Good Sound
*Great Story
|| Bad Points ||
(none)