Nothing All That New
You basically took the love story and eliminated the plot out of it completely. With a title and message like this I was expecting a lot more, but you tried simplicity, by trying to make it look dramatic and you did not succeed. Your artwork is masterful showing many light colors and masterful drawings... however your animation seemded to lag a bit, not much, but it did lag even when I put it into Low Quality. The story is just bland and boring. Yes it's a love-story, but not a very good one. All in all I suggest you either work on your writing or have someone write for you. Also your background song choice just made this flash seem more watered down, it was like watching a commercial, and not a good commercial either.
|| Good Points ||
*Masterful Artwork
*Great Animation
*Okay Story
|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Sound
*Boring