The-Great-One's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Magic With In]

Short... Yes...

Sucks... NO! This is a perfect loop. It loops perfectly and has a nice beat that isn't repetitive. You've done an outstanding job on this! Normally I wouldn't give such great standards to a loop under 30 seconds long, but you pulled it off, very magical indeed.

HelgiB responds:

thank you for the review :P

[Summer Rain]

Magnificent!

Wonderful! This put my mind at a bit of ease when I listened to it. It was so good I had to listen to it again. It was like Matchbox 20 meets The Beatles, simply outstanding! I loved this song from beginning to end, nothing out of place, nothing wrong, and nothing that needs to be changed.

[~Burden~]

A Description of Myself

You've captured me so well that it is almost scary. You made me look back into my life at my previous suicide attempts in life, I still can't believe that I was going to do that. I knew of my burdens, but I also gained control over my burdens as well and now my life is better and is filled with more glee than what it used to be.

How someone can have such a beautiful voice and tell tales of darkness, it amazes me really. A darkness so deep that those who live off insult will never see. Superb work on your audio, I can only hope and pray that you are not taken away from this world, so that your work may continue on for many years to come...

Thank You for helping me realize who and what I am.

[Chess]

Good Melody

You had a terrific melody, but your lyrics destroyed the song. You weren't even singing the song either, you were completely whining through the whole song. Your song sounds like one of those emo songs when Chess isn't all emo. You need to look more deeper into what you're writing. So find a better writer and find a better singer says this critic.

writtenkits responds:

I actually did look deep into what I was writing. It's an analogy. Meaning that of course Chess isn't all Emo. That's like you commenting that you can't write about a sad relationship, because relationships aren't all sad. If you don't like emo, fine. But don't vote me down because of your personal taste. Vote me down because the song blows, lol.

[Rig - Podcast Intro]

Not Bad...

It's pretty good, although you really could've played around with it more you know. I know it is supposed to be short, but more could've been done with 35 seconds. Still pretty good.

[RaBall]

Bouncy But...

Not exactly the greatest thing, more can be done with it. I suggest you concentrate on playing around with this some more.

[SSBM Fountain of Dreams Remix]

Good

It isn't an exact remix of the Fountains of Dreams stage from Melee, but it does sound like a very catchy SNES Fountain of Dreams tune. I liked it! Keep up the good work.

[Candle in the Wind]

Magnificent

Truly magnificent. This is my favorite of Elton John's songs and I'm glad someone here has decided to remix it themselves. Your voice sounds so close to Elton John's it really does. You've done simply an outstanding job on this song. Bravo!

[**==Simple yet more==**]

More...

You took something simple and added a bit more to it. It is kind of relaxing to listend to and does fit its category well. This also works well as a fantastic loop in my mind. Maybe you can make a full version of this song, something over 1 minute long.

monk1 responds:

Thanks a bunch!
Yeah I couldn't explain why but I felt like that sort of :P
The only reason I submitted it as a song was because I didn't think it looped well enough to be considered a loop...but either way thanks for the positive feedback. Much appreciated. ^_^

[++ Two Smoking Roses ++]

You Got It!

I see an RPG Desert Town, but not one during the day, one during the night! It is quite the catchy tune I must admit, I enjoyed it quite well. Bravo and keep up the good work.

kelwynshade responds:

Thanks. I'm glad it's catchy. It needs closer attention by me I suppose.