The-Great-One's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[++ Two Smoking Roses ++]

You Got It!

I see an RPG Desert Town, but not one during the day, one during the night! It is quite the catchy tune I must admit, I enjoyed it quite well. Bravo and keep up the good work.

kelwynshade responds:

Thanks. I'm glad it's catchy. It needs closer attention by me I suppose.

[Game Remix - Super Mario 64]

Superb

Out of all the remixes I've heard, this is by far the best of them all. I loved how you got it really close to the original. I will disagree with you by saying the original is better, but if someone wanted a remix this would be the best one to choose. Superb job indeed.

Sincerely,
The-Great-One

[~Path of Memories~]

Faces Last an Eternity

No matter the age, the time, the place, or the names. You remember a person by their face, not their names. A picture is worth a thousand words they say, but I believe they're worth so much more than that. You've done a marvelous job on this piece and I loved the build up at 1:34 really heightened up the mood. Well I can only hope to hear more great works from you.

Sincerely,
The-Great-One

kelwynshade responds:

Thanks for checking it out. I'm happy you liked this one.

[Crushed]

Great!

I must say that this is an outstanding piece. The beats you had in the background were way too repetitive though and it basically ruined the rest of the song. I say you should take out those beats and just keep the storm throughout the whole song.

shadow6nothing9 responds:

Thanks, I was thinking the same thing about the beats, and Im going to work on changing it around... maybe use it as a hit. I like the storm idea too, think i'll do that

[~EnV~Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix)]

Freaky...

A simplistic track. Not too bad as a dance song. It tended to get repetitive at times, but other than that it was a great song to listen to. Good job, and keep up the good work.

[Death of a Music Box]

NES?

Sounds like a creepy theme for an old NES game or even an old Super Nintendo game. I did enjoy this, although more could've been done with it in my mind. A darkness you put into it... like a haunted mansion where the daughter used to live and before you know it a doll she used to play with falls over with a knife in her back, you hear a giggle and turn around. Nobody is behind you, you turn back to see nothing in the doll's back. You see a light come on and a girl is standing there with her head lowered holding a knife. She says, do you want to play with me?

A great audio from you sir, great indeed.

[Mario's Star Power Loop]

Perfect!

You've done an absolute perfect job on this loop. Truly outstanding! Keep up the good work, you're doing great for a person with insomnia.

[Our Love Forever]

I hate you so much now...

You had to bring back those memories that I was trying to forget. Sure we didn't date long, but we were too far apart. To be honest we were two different people of different worlds. You've also given me the courage I didn't have before. I can only hope to run into her again, I mean to tell her everything now, what's the point in loving someone if you're not sure if they love you back.

You son of a bitch. Why? I know you made this out of love, but why did you have to submit it? It is very beautiful I'll admit. My head is hurting so much now I'm even amazd that I can still actualy type a little bit. Well you have made agreat song and I for one am happy yet angry at you for making this song .

Bosa responds:

Hee hee!

I mean.. oops..

You know, true love in a relationship is often hard to achieve. And it's true what you said, "What's the point in loving someone if you're not sure if they love you back?" I'm in this stage right now, to be honest. You know, you care about a girl, you check on her everyday to make sure she's alright, and that question still remains: Does she love me or am I wasting my time? I know it's not healthy to think about these things in a relationship, and it can often cause conflicts. But, it's there until you show her the true affection of your heart. Whatever her reaction may be is probably the answer to whether she loves you or not. Things can often be staged and sometimes you have to use your mind to get the answer you're looking for. I'm not saying she's just a tool to be used, or something for you to just fool with. I'm saying to be honest with her, and show her that you love her. If she loves you, you'll know in your heart whether she does or not. These things just work, believe it or not. One way or the other, things will just work. You just have to play your part and be the man, as she does to be the woman. Good luck, friend. May things folly to your side.

-Jon Babb

[Activate {demo}]

Hmm...

Yes you do need more build-up. Do not do random sounds unless you're absolutely sure you can pull them together. Maybe make it a little more smooth at the 1:04 mark, this may seem odd at first but trust me you'll have more to build on.

Mrmilkcarton responds:

I've been doing alot of revamping to the build ups. the second build up has changed a fair amount to the one thats up here now. Thanks for the review.

[KH: Dearly Beloved]

Good...

It's a little off somehow. I'm not sure, but it's off by some. I think you may be missing a note, I could be wrong so don't thrash me, but it just doesn't sound well really that close to the original. It's good I'll admit, but it's not what I was expecting.