Nicely Done...
Your artwork and animation were very well done. Also I enjoyed the story you told. However, your skills of combining the music and voice was a little off. Now then the flash was very good, but it was way too short... if you don't mind could you please finish it?
|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Great Story
|| Bad Points ||
*Voice Acting and Music Not Balanced
*Too Short