The-Great-One's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tha Wall]

Some Improvements

I did enjoy this flash very much, however a few small tweaks. One would be the animation, it ran in a jittery movement, plus the animation was a bit too fast, slow it down just a bit. Plus your THE END subtitle is too high, lower it down. Also a preloader would've been nice as well as a replay button. Your artwork was nicely done and I love your concept, please make another one.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Good Animation
*Superb Sound
*Superb Story

|| Bad Points ||
*Basic-Flash Requirements
+ Pre-Loader
+ Replay Button
*THE END Subtitle - Lower It

[Brother Battle]

Bravo!

Your sprite work was very well done, this wasn't too short at all, and the bloopers were also funny. I would like to see another Brother Battle in the near future. For this being your first flash, the animation was a bit slow, but it worked out well. The background music could've been louder, but it's all still good.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Animation
*Great Story
*Great Sprite Work
*Funny

|| Bad Points ||
*Sound Too Low

[Jimmy's Day in the Park]

Poor Jimmy...

Well let me start off by saying that I'm not going to unleash holy hell on this flash, because well, you've brought back the certain flavor that used to grace Newgrounds when Newgrounds just started out. I do believe you will improve over time and I did enjoy this and would love to see more from this Jimmy. Your artwork wasn't good, but there was enough to put the imagination to work, like Atari. It was random, but entertaining. I did enjoy it as well as the bit of music. Something fun to send to someone no doubt. I suggest you work on your drawing as well as making your next flash longer.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Story
*Great Sound
*Okay Animation
*Random (Funny)

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Artwork
*Too Short

[C or B? Remastered]

C or B?

Well, first off I'm disabling all points due to this flash, I am in no mood to give an explanation and I don't think I have to. This is a sad attempt at another big thing, I must admit I voted 5 out of sheer humor, however C will never be what B be today.

|| Points Disabled ||

joza1 responds:

Disabling points? OK....
Thanxies for the 5 anyway, even though you don't like it.

[INKmen: "username"]

Pretty Good

It was pretty good, however you need to fix some things. First off you might want to eliminate the Metal music for your intro and credits. Also a Preloader as well as Play and Replay buttons would serve well... plus you may want to work on the quality of the movie as well. Plus some light music in the background wouldn't serve to bad either. This was good, but could use improvements.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Story
*Okay Sound
*Good Artwork

|| Bad Points ||
*No Preloader

[Some old anims of mine]

This isn't half bad

This was actually quite good. The pivot animations ran very well from beginning to end. The artwork was also very well done, not just the stick figures, but the blood and the machine guns. However the text bubbles and music choice was a bit off, work on that some more. Other than that you've got a nice decent flash.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Great Artwork
*Good Story [Random]

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Music
*Bad Text Bubbles

[A Thousand Frames]

Majestic In It's Own Way

It was as if the pages of a person's notebook were turning before my eyes. The randomly drawn doodles interacting through the notebook. Your animation ran quite smoothly and it your choice of how to use random moments was very good. Your artwork was also great for this type of flash and the music choice was superb.
You've done an excellent job on this flash.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Great Artwork
*Story [ R a n d o m ]
*Kept My Attention
*Superb Sound

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

blackcat2000 responds:

Doodles... *drool*
If the moments seemed random, would it explain it if I said I made them up as I animated? ;)
The music was chosen because initially i just wanted to keep the file small, so I chose a loop, and it happened to fit... so i stuck with it! Thanks for the review! :)

[DNA and you!]

Okay Here We Go

To previous users who have reviewed this, just because it looks like a spin-off of LegendaryFrog doesn't mean it is. Both are different on huge scales if you didn't notice. Now then my only complaints are the artwork, animation, and sound. First off your artwork was lacking, not much there to tell the truth, you probably could've done a lot better. Second was the animation, it was a bit lazy when it came to characters and the lips on your characters hardly matched what they were saying from time to time... your moving DNA structure was awesome though. Last but not least the sound quality was bad... no it sucked from beginning to end. Now then the script wasn't bad, everything was explained and detailed in a very nice way, but to tell the truth it wasn't as entertaining as I expected it to be and was a bit confusing, I didn't know if I was watching an Educational movie about DNA or Radioactive Materials. You need serious work on your flash making skills.

|| Good Points ||
*Good Story
*Okay Artwork

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Sound
*Bad Animation
*Confusing