Jonas & Dragons 3rd edition
The artwork in this was great, mainly for the dragon and the Jonas brothers. I liked the detail put into the audience members, buildings, and cars, however there are some flaws. Like the shadowy audience members just shaking around behind the detailed audience members seems to me like you could've just made a picture of some audience members and had it bounce up and down if you wanted filler. Also when the two remaining Jonas brothers were in the car at the beginning of this car chase scene you kept switching back and forth the drivers side. The animation was great, not superb, but above average. The storyline was kind of creative, when I saw the dragon I was kind of worried that you'd pull something generic out, but you didn't. When the Jonas brothers were escaping the dragon I was actually hoping for them to live and then when they were pitifully mocking the dragon I wanted them to die SO BADLY! One flaw in your story is that the electric shield is 1,000 volts of electricity which I doubt could keep a dragon out. Perhaps 100,000 volts would've been a better number to work with to shock a dragon bad enough not to kill him, but at the same time to keep him out. The music choices were superb, tops goes to GoreBastard and you chose a tolerable Jonas Brothers song for this as well. The sound effects were nothing short of perfection, honestly no complaints from me in that department. The voice acting was great, not matching the Jonas Brothers, but at the same time getting close enough to them for it to work.
|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Great Animation
*Masterful Sound
*Superb Music
*Great Voice
*Great Story
|| Bad Points ||
*Artwork - Flip Flopping
*Artwork - Audience