Repetitive and Boring
Honestly this quite bland. There was really nothing here. I read your description of the poem you made here and was surprised that the song had nothing to do with the poem. So what was the point of posting the poem? As for the song itself like I said it was boring. No notes really stuck out because of your repetitive notes that you had placed. All in all you didn't give a whole lot for a four minute song, you could've experimented with this more than you did. Take this song and add more, possibly some strings here or there.
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