More Could've Been Done
I enjoy simple, but this was a bit boring. You could've played around with this more than you did. I beg you to take this and add more to it. It was just way too repetitive even for a loop.
More Could've Been Done
I enjoy simple, but this was a bit boring. You could've played around with this more than you did. I beg you to take this and add more to it. It was just way too repetitive even for a loop.
Thanks for the review :D I'll try adding some more on when i have some time. This is just rough draft for now.
Not Bad
For your first loop not bad. However I don't think you really made the Jolly Roger Bay theme all that great, and it doesn't really loop well. This song isn't an easy one to tackle at though.
Your beginning wasn't bad it's just well 0:23 is when it got bad and didn't really go that great. I think you can nail this song, it just takes practice. All I can say is don't give up and give it another go.
well in case you haven't noticed the NG player doesnt loops well ive tested it
IT LOOPS WELL
Breathtakingly Unbelievable
This is probably your best work yet. Out of all the songs you've done I believe you've come up with what I would call your true masterpiece. You stated wait until 1:30 and the patience is rewarded. A magnificent dance song... indeed a magnificent dance song. Excellent work.
wow thank you so much!
Excellent Work
I thought of this piece as outstanding and is certainly a very calming piece so you did deliver upon your actions. All I can say is this certainly has put my mind at a bit of ease. A superb job indeed. I can't wait to see some more great things from you within the future.
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Random and Catchy
This is certainly a hilarious song. I wouldn't mind using this myself for something. Your singing mixed with the effects are quite superb. I suggest you put this song in the Review Request Club and get other people's opinions. Certainly a fun song to listen to.
thank you very much!!
Quite Good
It is repetitive at some points, but other than that it is a very enjoyable Techno song. My only complaint had to be the end because you didn't finish big, just with repetitive notes at the end. I was expecting some kind of finale, but was dissappointed. Once again you should've really played around with this more than you did, but it is still enjoyable.
Thanks for the review!
I Enjoyed This
The small build-up at the beginning and the whole song came together so smoothly. The title certainly did fit the song very well. I picture shooting stars flying through the sky on a warm Summer night. You have made quite the enjoyable song here today. Bravo!
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Thanks! :D
Repetitive and Boring
Honestly this quite bland. There was really nothing here. I read your description of the poem you made here and was surprised that the song had nothing to do with the poem. So what was the point of posting the poem? As for the song itself like I said it was boring. No notes really stuck out because of your repetitive notes that you had placed. All in all you didn't give a whole lot for a four minute song, you could've experimented with this more than you did. Take this song and add more, possibly some strings here or there.
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All right. Ummmm.. I need to learn how to make some violin ore something sound good. I'm sorry it was boring..
Outstanding
Simply outstanding. It is simple yet very fun and catchy as well. I quite enjoyed this song, to be honest I really enjoyed this song. I see a ship of pirates sailing for many treasures stealing from people and causing havoc. It's like a title theme for a good old fashioned Saturday morning cartoon. Superb work and keep it up.
Thanks for the compliment! I'll do my best!
A bit jumbled
I think this is an experiment for you and it turned out quite well, it was a bit jumbled in some points, but at other points it was quite enjoyable. Really enjoyable actually. I felt like I was in a video game while listening to this. All I can say is keep up the great work.
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Hmm, jumbled? I wish you could have explained a little more on that, but that's okay. It might be because of all the different styles I meshed together. Some of the transitions are sudden, some are flowing.
-Well thank you for this review! I will definitely keep up the great work and hope that I can do well in Nashville, lol.
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