The-Great-One's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[simple mario loop 2.0]

Helpful Advice

First of all since this is a loop I'm not going to give you anything great out of it. Now then try starting the music when the movie plays instead of at the preloader. Also your work with sprites is great, but I want more of a story with it next time okay. I don't know how to compress mp3 files, but if you venture over to the Flash Forums I'm sure you'll find out soon enough.

|| Good Points ||
*Good With Sprites
*Nice Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Put More Together

zagfrog responds:

thx 4 the advice, i'll try & give my next flashes more storyline =)

[Shorts To Wear Pants To]

Bravo Good Sir Bravo Indeed!

I see this reaching the frontpage very quickly indeed. The songs, the artwork, the animation all came together so smoothly! Plus the sheer randomness put into each and every short was just magnificent. In which that is what randomness is supposed to be... humor with no effort. Also each song gave each short its well deserved honor. I see a sequel in the future I really do.

|| Good Points ||
*Hilarious
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Superb Sound
*Superb Randomness

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

squeakytoad responds:

Yeah, I think this group of animators fits perfectly with Andrew's songs.
We're a pretty random lot and we were just kicking back and having fun with it, much like his awesome tunes.

Maybe we'll do more in the future, once he's had time to release a bunch of new ones (though there are still hundreds that remain unanimated). This was definitely a great experience.

Glad you enjoyed!

[New Super Mario Bloopers]

I'm Gonna Be Honest With You

This wasn't really good. You can do better with sprites than this. First off the music at the beginning that you chose was just horrible, I'm glad the rest of the music you chose was good. Also the first joke was funny, but could've used more of a punchline. Your second joke was okay not the funniest in the world. Your last joke was basically pitiful. This was far too short and was not given enough effort... I say you try again and then we'll see if it should be in the Mario collection.

|| Good Points ||
*Okay With Sprites
*Kind Of Funny

|| Bad Points ||
*Need Better Punchlines
*Too Short
*Sprites Need More Work
*Put More Care Into Picking Songs

Nickclick2 responds:

You said: "*Put More Care Into Picking Songs"

Really, I just had the sound too loud.

[Tetris Deathtrap]

Very Nice

This was very nicely done, in fact you should think about turning this into a sort of game. The animation wasn't all that great, it was good, but could've used more work. Also Stick Figures fighting within this Tetris Deathtrap would've really been awesome, but this was still good either way around.

|| Good Points ||
*Nice Idea
*Good Animation
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Could've Used More Work
*Done At A Slow Pace

IceyDrummer responds:

Ya i actually thought about that but i wanted certain people to die certain ways and i kind of killed them all off pretty early so i couldn't really have they fight but i decided that yellow and blue would work together til' blue wanted to go a different way...

[First C&B stick animation]

Not Bad...but not Good.

Okay I can get passed the whole Corneil & Bernie thing to review this flash fairly. Now then your stick figures aren't too bad, they could've used more work back then, but I do believe you've improved over time. I suggest writing your own material though or find a writer on Newgrounds to write your stuff for you, you shouldn't be taking characters from other shows unless you plan on making them into a very funny parody.

|| Good Points ||
*Okay stick figures
*Good Sound
*Okay Story
*Okay Animation

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Artwork
*

bernie-buddy responds:

What part of OLD FLASH MOVIE did you not under stand?!

[Things that make me Angry]

A Good Start...

The story is good and interesting and follows with the animation. It makes sense and I love it! I also can't wait for the next part of this series. Your sound and animation were smooth and so was your animations, but the story really didn't catch me completely... all I can say is I want to see more of this series.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Great Sound
*Funny

|| Bad Points ||
*Story Not All That Great

Miren2k responds:

cool thanks for the review - its weird though, other people have said the complete opposite: bad animation - but very good concept and story

i appreciate your review - il just try improve everything as much as i can as i get on in the world of animating perhaps have a story you can more easily relate to in my next one aswel

[iPaper]

Not bad...

Not bad at all...for a video though your graphics were kinda bad, but still good. I love your parody of the iphone and can offer new ideas to you also (Check for PM). The concept is great and for a video your sound quality is superb. Just one question, at the very end what was the message?

|| Good Points ||
*Good for a Video
*Comical
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Quality kinda bad

Bluedude1044 responds:

Sorry about the quality. It was because the file was to big. And it said "in stores never"

[Its A Chain Reaction!!]

Keep Trying...

Ths sound was off, but you did tell us of that. I can see the work you put into it, but more of an effort wouldn't kill ya either. Your animation good use more work and please if you make another one, make it longer. Other than that it was okay, you just have a nice bit of room to improve.

|| Good Points ||
*It was okay

|| Bad Points ||
*Too short
*Animation needs work
*Sound needs work

mamacaddyhat responds:

Yep, I didnt know how to change the sound, i did try.

anyway thanks for the review, much appreciated! ;)

[Super Sprite Bloopers]

Whoa Bad...

Well, your sprite skills are good, but it seems when it comes to ideas and the times here on Newgrounds you're late. Now then for one the Numa Numa Craze is over, same with the jokes, plus I believe you've taken the idea from Robot Chicken or Skittles N' Bitz (in which Skittles N' Bitz is just Robot Chicken with Sprites). Plus you gave this the wrong title, this is just random sprites formed to try and be Skittles N' Bitz, not Bloopers. I think you need a writer to write your material for you... or you need to work harder on your concept of comedy.

|| Good Points ||
*Good with Sprites

|| Bad Points ||
*Wrong Title
*A Basic Ripoff of Skittles N' Bitz
*Not Funny

PaperBat responds:

Robot Chicken, Im A Huge fan, thats why i made this, Do YOU complain to the creaotr of Skittlez and Bits about ow he copys robot chicken?

[Awesome techno dance!]

Where Have I Seen This Before?

Oh yeah...well on a personal note I should tell you that your obsession over a cartoon show that nobody likes is unhealthy. Now then making a flash of just techno music and moving clip art with an annoying background is just spamming the portal with flash that people don't won't to see. Now then I've seen this before so let me refresh some people's memories... oh yeah Kitty Krew and Star Syndicate, except without the dicks. Come on man, try more!

|| Good Points ||
(none)

|| Bad Points ||
*Nothing but Animated Clip Art
*Annoying Music
*Like A Kitty Krew Flash

bernie-buddy responds:

I will have you know that "Corneil & Bernie" is a well liked cartoon, your review was abusive, and overall, you do not act mature enough, it is just a flash i made, in fact, it's the very first flash i submitted to newgrounds.