The-Great-One's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Red Ball]

Amazing Concept

Your artwork and animation were both great as well as your sound choice. You do have some mispellings, but it's nothing big. The storyline however is what made this flash what it is. You are a wonderful writer and I enjoyed the entire story, but your overall presentation of it could've been better.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Great Animation
*Great Sound
*Superb Story
*Deep Meanings

|| Bad Points ||
*Grammar - Mispellings

karthon responds:

yeah, I'll work on it.
Next time I will use a beta-tester :D
thx for review

[The X Chronicles]

Not Too Shabby...

Your sprite work is quite good, your storyline is exceedingly well. There are scenes with background music and scenes with no background music at all. This is where it becomes quite odd. Also the history text went by a bit too fast. All in all it was a decent flash and being your first was done quite well.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Good Sound
*Great Story

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Anwich responds:

thank you very much, yeah, i realize the sound isnt great, but i really had no one to guide me on that, but i recently found a mucchhhhh better way to both cut down on filesize and have the music playing the whole time! thank you for your review!

[Frame By Frame Flash]

Pretty Good

Your artwork and animation were both really great, You stated this is random drawings coming from your mind and I must say I enjoyed your randomness. However your background music choice didn't really fit this flash at all and I actually ended up turning off my speakers so I could enjoy the flash. All in all pretty good.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Great Animation
*Great Story
*Amusing

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Sound

J0hnnyR0tt3n responds:

well everyone has there own style of music, I love Horse the Band so it was only natural for me to choose them in my work. Thanks for the review and try to keep in mind that this is my second flash ever and i learn everything by myself! i hate tuts.

[Mindless Stick Violence 1]

What Happened?

Seriously, what the fuck just happened? Your artwork with stick figures have gone better, but your animation went by way too fast and I didn't keep up with any of it. What happened at the beginning? What happened at the end? I have no idea what just happened. It sucks when you blink and miss half of the flash movie. Tone down the speed man, the best thing about action sequences is getting to see them. The sound was heavy metal, which I was actually surprised you put in this flash, it just made it seem generic, which is a bad thing. This flash could've been a lot better, if I had any idea what happened.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Okay Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Animation
*Too Fast

tankbuster781 responds:

lol wut
this is one of my oldest flashes I have made, don't expect anything all great and stuff.
Plus, there really wasn't any point to this movie, that's why it's called mindless stick violence.
also, cut me some slack. I made this when I was 12 and I barely had any flash experience. But still, thanks for reviewing my movies.

[Messing with red...]

Better than Messing with coffee...

This is better than the original I must say. The artwork is still sloppy, you could've done more work on this than you did. The animation this time around was much better. I also loved the background music you picked for this, classy yet enough for the action. One thing that really gripes me though was that this was too short... why did you only work on it for 1 Day?

|| Good Points ||
*Good Artwork
*Great Animation
*Superb Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Too Short

tankbuster781 responds:

Well, my movies are very short because I really don't have that kind of patience to make a 2 minute movie because I go out alot then the movie will take like 5 months to make.

[Music Movie]

Length is the Issue

The only thing I can really gripe about was the length of each short therefore making this way too short. The concepts were there, but it looks like you got lazy. The artwork and animation are great and your music and sound were also quite great, but it's just that you could've done a lot more with this. This flash not only went by too fast it was too short. I was really expecting a lot more.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Great Animation
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Too Short
*Incomplete

tankbuster781 responds:

Actually, this movie was originally going to be called,
the unfinished movies compilation.
I thought that was a bad name but an alright movie idea.
Then I noticed that most of my unfinished movies were unfinished music videos!
So I took the unfinished movies that didn't have music and renamed it "Music Movie"
c:

[Jay Jay the Junked Plane]

Quite Funny Good Sir

Your artwork was great, very comical indeed... the only thing I have to really complain about are the flames, I'm gonna let it go because I believe you were going with a cartoony look on them. The animation was a bit lazy at some points, but still came together. What I really liked was just the parody, the storyline. It was hilarious! Probably one of your funniest flash movies I've ever seen. All I can say is keep up the fond and funny work.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Good Animation
*Great Story
*Great Sound
*Hilarious!

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

LordHayden responds:

I'm not too good at drawing fire.

[I'm Still Here]

Brilliant

This is possibly one of the most creative flash movies I've seen in a long time. The artwork and animation are nothing more than masterful and the sound choice fits the animation perfectly. The storyline isn't sad, happy, hateful, or romantic. It's possibly all of the above or only a few, depending on the viewer. I saw both sadness and happiness within this flash movie. It truly is one that makes you think. I would love to see more things from you within the future. More serious works.

|| Good Points ||
*Masterful Artwork
*Masterful Animation
*Masterful Sound
*Masterful Story
*Impact on one's Soul

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

LeafLock responds:

you honor me with your kind words.

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 8]

Hilarious!

Your artwork is better this time around from your previous episode and the animation is superb too. With flash I'm sure you'll be able to do many great things in the future with Jim and his pals. The sound was funny as well as the storyline. Especially the Mac and PC opening joke.

|| Good Points ||
*Superb Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Superb Sound
*Superb Story
*Quite Humorous

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Jimtopia responds:

Hehe, the Mac/PC thing just came to me at the last minute and I had to add it in.

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 7]

Funny, However...

The artwork seems a bit slack. The animation is there, but the artwork seems like you slacked off a little bit on this one. The storyline is humrous, but the ending still doesn't make much sense to me. Not bad, but not your best.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Superb Animation
*Great Sound
*Good Story
*Funny

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Jimtopia responds:

Yeah, well I made this one in a matter of 8 hours, with absolutely no ideas about what it would be before I started. This is probably my least favorite out of them all.