The-Great-One's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Paper Luigi pt. 1]

Not Good...

This was not a good sprite movie. The storyline fell apart, and the battle scenes were boring. You need to work on your sprite work some more and hire a writer. This isn't good, but trial and error can fix your problem.

|| Good Points ||
*Sound was good

|| Bad Points ||
*Need work on Sprites
*Storyline was bad

Bstuk2 responds:

The sound took up most the filesize, so the sound quality was really good. I am making sprites for the next one.

[Super Mario RPG 2: TDS P1]

Nicely Done

Your work with sprites could use some more work, but for this being your first flash movie with sprites I'd say it's pretty good. With the two first enemies you put in makes the storyline superb. I can't wait until P2. Also just a question...will more partners be joining Mario and Luigi? Yet anyways, your sound, sprites, and story are all good. Keep up the good work!

ikool responds:

thanx very munch!

[FLEA MARKET]

Awesomeness

Pure short flash movie genius. Flea Market. This song gets stuck in your head very quickly, very quickly indeed. I love this flash!

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

That's the point. It is the epitomy of EVILLLLL.
Thanks for <3ing it.

[Google Adventure]

Well...

It's a nice concept, but you could've done more work into it and made each character do something different. I like the idea of it, you could really turn this into a video game with Google taking over the big time websites.

|| Good Points ||
*Nice Idea
*Could Be A Video Game
*Great Graphics
*Great Sound

|| Bad Points ||
*Got A Little Boring

Emptygoddess responds:

Could have. You didn't really need to watch every single one though. I'm sorry if you did. Terribly sorry. If I could give you that time back I would.

[Rhyming Words]

Fat...Cat...Sat...Hat...DAMN YOU FOR RHYMING!

You did a great job on this flash. This song is very addicting and rhyming is excellent, and it gets stuck in your head...fed...Dammit! It gets stuck in your...well it's just addicting let's just put it at that.

|| Good Points |||
*Nice choice of song
*Great on Graphics
*Very Addicting
*Love the extra part at the end

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

Lord-Sonx responds:

red head fed bread!

[[KK] NG Commerical]

Stepping Up

Well the Kitty Krew is actually going up the ladder. Very nice and very funny I must say. There must be more you can do with Newgrounds and Commercials. Maybe more GEICO stuff?

|| Good Points ||
*Funny
*Potential for Series
*Good for the Kitty Krew

|| Bad Points ||
(none) believe it or not

KGB-Kitty responds:

=D

[Mario, Luigi, and Yoshi]

Dude that's pretty good.

This is pretty good. Don't pay attention to the sprite haters out there. I know that it takes time and effort to make sprite movies. This was pretty good, but you could've had a story behind it. Maybe you should think out your flash next time. I love the idea of Mario, Luigi, and Yoshi, on an adventure, but you need a reason why, you need a story.

|| Good Points ||
*Great with pixels
*Nice choice of music
*Could've been a little more humorous

|| Bad Points ||
*Needs a storyline

John12346 responds:

Thanks, but I don't use subtitles in my movies, so it would be pretty hard to make a storyline, so I try to let the action do the talking. However, after the recent success of Mario- The Time War, I'm kind of considering putting a storyline in with subtitles. I just don't use them because when you make the characters talk on your own, people seem like they're listening to the flash creator, and not the character, so I think it would be best to stay with voice .wavs and no subtitles.

I hope I didn't bore you; thanks for the review.

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John12346